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An introduction piece me and :iconbenji-blacksky: did. Melanie will more than likely be the poster gal for something I intend to do in the near future and this is just her and her bodyguard encountering some rather cliche beings...I mean come on, one is named We Eat Coach for Heaven's sake!

:iconbenji-blacksky: - Dreall
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As newly self-proclaimed story critic, I hereby give Melanie Counts her Calories....

:iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: = 5 CLAPS!

Reason / Final Opinion = The story was just fabulously written, as if there were images of the story painted in one's head. And to be honest, when you were describing Dreall, I thought it said 'boyfriend', but when I read correctly, it really said 'bodyguard!' LOL! Sounds like a case of Dreall saving the day!